TOM BLOOD EDITS YOUR POEMS
Tuesday September 30, 2008
$10 poetry crit (includes email and expedited letter)
strengths phrases, beat, emotions
weaknesses meaning, meter, anger
email a poem, 24 hour return
an hour of critique
see tom’s credentials.
// / / // / writes:
you cats should make little fridge magnets.
posted Sep 30, 01:05 PM ~
carlos writes:
i thousand love you
posted Sep 30, 01:15 PM ~
Alexander Arvelo McQuaig writes:
for real? I really want to do this. is it a real letter? thank you
posted Sep 30, 07:04 PM ~
truth writes:
tis. real paper.
posted Sep 30, 07:31 PM ~
carlos writes:
i do feel it’s worth it, especially the idea that it is a 10 dollar piece of art/writing from tom. original. and about you and/or your work!
posted Sep 30, 07:50 PM ~
Kaleb Obama writes:
of all the things I miss – one would be my ‘Sky Position’ audio cd [the most]. gosh. where did it go.. ./ will I ever know? / arrived in a clear case / Billy Ocean sticker on top / sadness prevails / will this pain ever stop? /
posted Oct 1, 12:59 PM ~
carlos writes:
cry me a river of sky
posted Oct 1, 01:03 PM ~
leopold marmot writes:
Where is my dog?
Not my dog, but my dog
Maybe my dawg
It’s stupid in here
In my dawg
Where’s the hat?
It is fun to wear the hat
posted Oct 1, 01:30 PM ~
chad writes:
There once was a site
on the internet so cool
they edit your poems
—-Haiku about Marriage by Chad Heile
posted Oct 1, 02:04 PM ~
Kaleb'o writes:
I was being grave.
posted Oct 1, 02:28 PM ~
:() writes:
lost is on
posted Oct 1, 04:22 PM ~
carlos writes:
kaleb honey,
we have a new one coming to you baby.
don’t be mad sweetie.
posted Oct 1, 08:31 PM ~
Azure writes:
I love this project.
Incredible.
posted Oct 2, 01:52 AM ~
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posted Oct 2, 11:17 AM ~
carlos writes:
word is adrian is doing ok with the appendicitis removed. maybe going to sneak out of hospital soon with maria.
posted Oct 2, 12:15 PM ~
Alexander Arvelo McQuaig writes:
Do they remove the appendix? Who is Maria? I had a surgery once and it was terrible.
posted Oct 2, 03:15 PM ~
carlos writes:
maria dixon
posted Oct 2, 04:46 PM ~
maria writes:
hey i don’t look like that. am high tho. fhaadadahaaha.
posted Oct 3, 09:29 AM ~
.// . ≈☻▬// ○ writes:
maria is the siamese puss, non?
posted Oct 4, 05:52 AM ~
jordan@marriagerecs.com writes:
what’s your address kaleb?
posted Oct 4, 06:08 PM ~
.// . ≈☻▬// ○ writes:
kaleb | sctas
po box sixty-one
appomattox, virginia 24522
posted Oct 4, 07:27 PM ~